优秀英文作文【25篇】
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英文作文 1
Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not. So far as I know，everybody intends to be （become） a model student. However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing. First，he mus
Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not. So far as I know，everybody intends to be （become） a model student.
However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing.
First，he must do his best to obtain knowledge. A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed.
Secondly，he must remember to improve his health. Only a strong man can do great tasks.
Thirdly，he should receive moral education. If his conduct is not good，no one will consider making friends with him.
英文作文 2
Spring is the best season of a year. The weather gets warmer and Waemer. My classmates and I took a one-day sightseeing tour around our city. The scene was very beautiful. But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry and thought a lot.
With the development of; modern industry and agriculture, more and more waste is being poured into rivers. It has caused serious pollution. The rivers are becoming so dirty that nothing can live in them. The rivers are giving off a terrible smell.
We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation. Our government should build various facilities such as sewage treatment plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce water pollution.
Water is the source of our lives. It is very important to protect the water.
优秀英文作文 3
I've been asked how good my grades are? Every time I don't know how to answer, because the full mark of each exam seems to be natural. The primary school is about to graduate, and I still hold the title of the whole school grade, but I swear I never cared about my score, whether you believe it or not. In order to satisfy your curiosity, I will publish my study plan of this winter vacation:
First of all, it is my motto: wisdom is because you like to learn, genius is the accumulation of your knowledge.
My winter vacation study plan is as follows:
1. Get up at 6:30 in the morning, by the way, I never have a lazy bed, read English and Chinese for at least 30 minutes (reading English, reading English, reading Chinese, and then on Sunday).
2. Complete the winter vacation homework for each subject one to three pages each day. Alone, my habit is to do their homework will never get to the Internet to check the answer (not sure can read related books, the accumulation of their knowledge, and then do my homework, otherwise it was useless to do much homework).
3. Take a proper lunch break at noon (I usually take a nap of about 1 hour) to ensure that I have enough energy to study in the afternoon.
4. After taking a nap, I can play badminton and go up QQ, etc. But the cumulative time is not more than an hour and a half. Generally it is 30 minutes of exercise, 50 minutes of computer, and also the love 4 (haha, 50+50=50, not very good).
5, there are two tasks in the afternoon, the first task is to read extracurricular books, up to the astronomy, geography, books can increase knowledge or experience in all things I can't let go, time control in 1 to 2 hours. In all probability, I have seen it.
The second task is to prepare for each course of the next semester. Before the beginning of the semester, I will study the next semester's work from beginning to end, and the time is 1-2 hours.
6, evening free activities and finish the day after finish art school, didn't finish the task, I always is you can do today until tomorrow), but have to look at the news and newspapers (heard about junior middle school will sometimes class exam content, is from the news. As the saying goes: "the scholar does not go out, can know the matter", how to say za is also a small intellectual, xi xi.
Last but not least, it is necessary to arrange the time reasonably and carry out the plan strictly, otherwise the good plan will be useless.
In the upcoming primary school last semester, I will, as always, reasonable arrangement study time, rest, entertainment, put every moment of precious time to (I don't want to idle young, needy old, no one will sympathize with you).
英文作文 4
Dear Jeff,
I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
英文作文 5
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Fang. I’m a happy girl. I’m a student in a primary school. I’m in Class Four, Grade Six.
I have a round face, two big, bright eyes and a small nose. I like drawing very much. I often draw pictures for my friends. I’m good at math. I study very hard.
Would you like to make friends with me? I will draw a picture for you.
英文作文 6
When I learned English, I felt so hard, because no matter hard I tried, I just could not understand the grammar. One day, my sister asked me why was I so confused with English, I told her I did not know, I was so afraid of it. Then she asked me to watch English movie and listened to the English songs. At first, I fell in love with these songs, I learned to sing them, I found I could remember more and more words. I also felt very interested in the movie, I could learn the local words. With interest, I make great progress, I am not afraid of English any more. Interest is the best teacher.
在我学英语的时候，我感到很困难，因为无论我多么努力去尝试，我就是无法理解语法。一天，我的姐姐问我为什么对英语感到困惑，我告诉她我也不知道，我就是很怕英语。然后她叫我去看英语电影和听英语歌曲。刚开始，我爱上了英语歌，我学着去唱，我发现我能记住越来越多的词。我也对电影很感兴趣，我能学到本土的词汇。有了兴趣，我进步很大，再也不害怕英语了。兴趣是最好的`老师。
英文作文 7
假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。
注意：1.词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。在文章中首先把握了全部的`要点，叙述较为完整；其次，运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联，意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时，这是值得肯定的地方。
英文作文 8
My name is Gong Chen. I am a fourteen-year-old girl. Now, I study at Dongzhou Middle School.
My school is very big and beautiful.
There are seven lofty buildings in our school and there are a lot of classrooms in it. There are some nice flowers in my school. There is a new playground in our school. We students exercise in the playground every day. Our school library is at the back of our school. We can do some reading there after class. It’s a nice place to study.
When you come into our school, you can see a lake near the school gate. There are three ducks swimming and playing in it. What a beautiful school!
I like my school. I am proud of being a student in our school. I’ll work hard for it.
我的名字是陈。我是一一四岁女孩。现在，我在东洲中学读书。
我的学校是非常大的和美丽的。
我们学校有七座高大的建筑物，里面有很多的教室。我学校有一些漂亮的花。我们学校有一个新的操场。我们学生每天在操场上运动。我们学校的图书馆在我们学校的后面。下课后我们可以做一些阅读。这是一个很好的学习场所。
当你进入我们学校的时候，你可以看到学校门口附近的一个湖。有三只鸭子在游泳和玩耍。多么漂亮的学校！
我喜欢我的学校。我为我们学校的学生而感到骄傲。我会努力工作的。
英文作文 9
My View on The Advantage of Keeping Pets 关于养宠物的好处
When it comes to the topic of keeping pets, some may think it is a waste of bothtime and money; some people, may find it is a great joy. As for me, I hold that keeping pets can bring me happiness.
关于饲养宠物，有的 至于我，我认为养宠物能带来快乐。
Firstly,keeping pets can keep us company when we feel lonely. As we know that it is impossible for us to stay with others all the time, and sometimes we have tostay all by ourselves. At this time we may feel lonely, if you have a pet, itwill help to keep company with you. You can play with your pet and regard it as your friend.
首先，宠物能在我们感觉孤独是陪伴我们，因为我们不可能时刻都有人相伴左右，而有的时候我们更愿意独处，这个时候可能会感觉孤独，如果有宠物，它就会是很好的陪伴。我们可以和动物一起玩，可以把它当朋友。
Secondly,keeping pets makes our world more harmonious. Animals are good friends to us human beings; it will make our world more harmonious to build friendship with them.
其次，宠物能让世界更和谐。动物是人类的好朋友，和动物建立朋友的关系将会使我们的世界更加和谐。
Last but not least, keeping pets makes us more patience. Animal needs careful cares,and we need bath them, feed them and take them out every day, which is time consuming. If we have a pet and can do that every day, we will become more patient.
最后，动物会使我们更有耐心。动物需要细心的照料，我们要给它洗澡、喂饭，还要每天带出去遛遛，这都很费时。如果我们有宠物，并每天这样照料它，我们会更有耐心的。
In a word, keeping pets can keep us company, make our world more harmonious and make us more patient, so I think it is a great for us to keep pets.
总的来说，宠物能陪伴我们，让我们的。世界更加和谐，并锻炼我们的耐心，所
英文作文 10
during the winter holiday,i was very happy because of the chinese new year and other reasons.during the holiday,my parents and i went back to my hometown in the countryside in hebei province.i had not come back for several years,so that i was so surprised to find that great changes had taken place in this small village in the past years.almost every family in the village had color tv set and some of them had computers.many families had their houses newly built or rebuilt.previously,the tile-roofed houses could be seen everywhere,but now they have taken on an entirely or even private cars are not luxuries any more.
one of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.previously,the villagers were busy in their farm work all the year round,but now they have much more time and money to relax or has become a new trend among villagers.seeing these amazing changes,my father said that he would go back to my hometown as soon as he retired.as for me,i strongly supported his idea.
【my winter vacation】 during my winter vacation,i was very seemed interesting,except for doing homework,watching tv or playing computer games.however,it was interesting at the last few days.i bought my lovely guitar.whenever i felt bored,i could take it out and play it.my most favorite thing was this guitar.let me sum up the than half of a month has passed.i went to qingyuan for spring festival and after coming back,i spent the few days left in my guitar world.how short this vacation was!
英文作文 11
Winter was gone,spring comes.I love spring best,because it's very beautiful.In spring,the weather is aways sunny and rainy,it's not cold and not hot,it's warmer and warmer.The flowers begin to open and the trees begin to turn green.The birds are singing in the sky,they are happy.The animals will go out to play.Many people like to go out and enjoy the sunshine.I like wearing my sweater and jeans, I like to fly kites,plant trees and see the beautiful flowers. Spring is colorful,I think it's a wonderful season. What's your favourite season?Please tell me.
翻译
冬天过去了，春天来了。我最喜欢春天，因为它很美丽。春天，天气是晴天和雨天，不冷也不热，它的温暖，花儿开始开放，树开始变绿了，鸟儿在天空中歌唱，他们是快乐的。动物们就出去玩。很多人喜欢去享受阳光。我喜欢穿毛衣和牛仔裤，我喜欢放风筝，种树，看到美丽的花朵。春天是多姿多彩的`，我认为这是一个美妙的季节。你最喜欢的季节是什么？请告诉我。
英文作文 12
“Mummy ！ Mummy! Thank goodness it’s you! I’ve just escaped by a whisker from the most frightful scary monster that there ever was ！”
“Just now, I was strolling along minding my own business when, just as I turned into the farm yard, I saw two strange creatures. One of them looked very kind and fluffy, and had lovely whiskers, but the other was the most scary monster you'd ever watched! Woww ！
“On top of his head and in front of his neck hung pieces of raw red meat. He walked about this way and that, tearing up the ground with his toes, and beating his arms against his sides. The moment he caught sight of me he opened his pointed mouth as if to swallow me, and then he let out a cry that frightened me almost to death.”
“If it had not been for that terrible monster, I would have made friends with the pretty creature, who looked so good and gentle. He had thick, velvety fur, a soft face, and his eyes were bright and shining. As he looked at me he waved his fine long tail and smiled.
“I am sure he was just about to speak to me when the monster I have told you about let out a screaming yell, I ran for my life.”
Mother Mouse
“My little mouse, that gentle creature you saw was none other than the Cat. Under his kindly appearance, he bears a grudge against every one of us. The other was nothing but the Cockerel, who wouldn’t harm you in the least. As for the Cat, he eats us. So be thankful, my child, that you escaped with your life, and, as long as you live, never judge people by their looks.
英文作文 13
几千年以来，人们已经接受各种领域里的挑战。不仅有身体方面的挑战，也有社会和智力方面的挑战。一些人冒着生命危险参加体育运动去证明他们能做得多好。还有一些应尽力去发明东西使生活更加简单。他们乐意于挑战。
为什么人们乐意于挑战？有许多的理由。一就是好奇心。另外就是成就感。而今天，对于某些人，那是一种工作。今天我们仍然面对许多的挑战。医学面对着攻克许多仍然袭击人类的病魔的挑战。工程师和规划者得建成新的城市，设计和生产新的交通工具，科学家得发展新形式的能源。
总之，我们生活在一个挑战的年代里。
For thousands of years, people have accepted challenges in different fields. There are not only physical challenges, but also social and intellectual challenges. Some people risk their lives in playing sports to see how well they can do. Others try to make and invent something to make life easier. They all enjoy challenges.
Why do people enjoy these challenges? There are probably many reasons. One is curiosity. The other is the personal feeling of success, of achievement. And nowadays, for some people, it is a business.
Today we still have many challenges before us. Medical science faces the challenges of conquering many diseases which still attack human beings. Engineers and planners must build new cities and design and produce new kinds of transportation. Scientists must develop new forms of energy.
In short, we live in an age of challenges.
英文作文 14
The Cobbler and the Banker
By La Fontaine
A cobbler passed his time in singing from morning till night;it was wonderful to see,wonderful to hear him;he was more contented in shoes,than was any of the seven sages.His neighbor,on the contrary,who was rolling in wealth,sung but little and slept less.He was a banker;when by chance he fell into a doze at day-break,the cobbler 12 awoke him with his song.The banker complained sadly that Providence had not made sleep a saleable commodity,like edibles or drinkables.
Having at length sent for the songster,he said to him,
"How much a year do you earn,Master Gregory?"
"How much a year,sir?"said the merry cobbler laughing,"I have reckon in that way,living as I do from one day to another;somehow I manage to reach the end of the year;each day brings its meal."
"Well then!How much a day do you earn,my friend?"
"Sometimes more,sometimes less;but the worst of it is,-and,without that our earnings would be very tolerable, a number of days occur in the year on which we are forbidden to work;and the curate,moreover,is constantly adding some new saint to the list.
The banker,laughing at his simplicity,said,"In the future I shall place you above want.Take this hundred crowns,preserve them carefully,and make use of them in time of need."
The cobbler fancied he beheld all the wealth which the earth had produced in the past century for the use of home,he buried his money and his happiness at the same time,No more singin;he lost his voice,the moment he acquired that which is the source of so much grief.Sleep quitted his dwelling; and cares,suspicions,and false alarms took its place,All day,his eye wandered in the direction of his treasure;and at night,if some stray cat made a noise,the cat was robbing him.
At length the poor man ran to the house of his rich neighbor;"Give my back." said he,"sleep and my voice,and take your hundred crowns."
参考翻译
皮匠和银行家
拉。封丹
一个皮匠从早到晚在唱歌中度过。无论见到他本人或听见他的歌声都使人觉得很愉快。他对于制鞋工作比当上了希腊七圣还要满足。
于工作把他吵醒了。银行家郁郁寡欢地抱怨上帝没有睡眠也制成一种像食品或饮料那样可以买卖的商品。后来，银行家就叫人把这位 歌手请来，问道：“格列戈里师傅，你一年赚多少钱？”
“先生，你问我一年赚多少钱吗？”快乐的皮匠笑道：“我从来不算这笔帐，我是一天一天地过日子，总而言之坚持到年底，每天挣足三餐。”
“啊，朋友，那么你一天赚多少钱呢？”
“有时多一点，有时少一点；不过最糟糕的是一年中总有些日子不准我们做买卖，牧师又常常在圣徒名单上添新名字，否则我们的收入也还算不错的。”
银行家被皮匠的。直率逗笑了，他说：“我要你从今以后不愁没钱用。这一百枚钱你拿去，小心放好，需要时拿来用吧。” 皮匠觉自己好像看到了过去几百年� 他回到家中，埋藏好硬币，同时也埋葬了他的快乐。他不再唱歌了；从他得到这种痛苦的根源那一刻起，他的嗓子就哑了。睡眠与他分手；取而代之的却是担心、怀疑、虚惊。白天，他的 目光尽朝埋藏硬币的方向望；夜间，如果有只迷途的猫弄出一点声响，他就以为是有人来抢他的钱。最后，这个可怜的皮匠跑到他那富有的邻居家里说：“把你的一百枚钱拿回去，还我的睡眠和歌声来。”
英文作文 15
Spring is a delightful season.The temperatures are moderate,and the blooming trees and flowers make the city bright with colors.This is the time when we can begin to wear lighter and more brightly colored clothes and go outdoors moreoften.
Small children like to bring their kites out to Dr. Sun Yat-Sen's Memorial Hall. Also,this is the season for the grave cleaning day when we go to honor our past generations.
I enjoy going back to the village on this holiday after being in the city for the winter months.
英文作文 16
How to promote college student’s creativity As we know,there are signs that college students are lack of creativity in China.This condition is caused by many reasons.Frist of all,in Chinese tradition”teaching by holding his hand”is the best way to develop skills,which makes students lose the ability of thinking deeply.Besides,solving problems with computers makes students very lazy,so much so that they lose the interest of creativity.What’s worse,quantities of students hold the view that creativity is useless.In my opinion,measures must be taken to promote college student’s creativity.There are many things that we can the one hand,the government should issue some polices which are good at the other hand,we should learn some useful experience from Western style,for example,paying more attention to originality and independence.What’s important is that we college students should set up the ideas that creativity create new world and we have potential to create new world.
In conclusion,only if we make concerted efforts we can own the sprirt of creativity.
英文作文 17
To build a conservation-oriented society is the new concept for our country. How to make it? I think to build a conservation-oriented society can from two sides. Firstly, saving energy would be the first thing. We need to save all resource that we use in our daily life. We need to change our habit of extravagance and waste. Secondly, we had better try our best to recycle something so that we can have more resource to use. For example, the water that we have used to wash vegetable can be used to wash toilet again. If we can do these, I believe building a conservation-oriented society is not a difficult thing.
建立节约型社会是是我国的新理念。如何做到呢？我觉得建立一个节约型社会可以从两方面着手。首先，节约能源是首要的。我们需要节约我们日常生活中所使用到的所有能源。我们要改变我们铺张浪费的习惯。其次，我们最好尽量循环利用，这样我们就可以有更多的资源了。例如，我们用来洗菜的水还可以用来冲厕所。如果我们能做到这些，我觉得建设节约型社会并不是一件难事。
关于英语的作文 18
亲爱的梅伊，
谢谢你的邀请。对不起。今天晚上我不能去看你。我真的很忙。星期六早上，我在看书。下午，我要去看电影。星期天早上，我必须为英语考试而学习。下午，我在踢足球。
寒假我想邀请你去我家。
尽快写信
英语高中作文 19
英语是一门实践性和人文性都很强的学科，高中英语作文教学尝试。高中英语教学的目的是指导学生更好地进行语言实践，努力使基础知识转化为言语技能，并发展成为运用英语进行口头和笔头交际的能力。英语书面表达是对学生的组织和应用所学知识的能力的考查，也是检验学生学以致用的水平的主要形式。但是在平时的教学中，老师们常常抱怨相当一部份学生的作文中语误繁多，辞不达意，句式单一，甚至逻辑混乱。既使花了相当的时间和精力进行写作训练，大多数学生的写作水平仍是原地踏步，收效甚微。应该采取什么措施加以训练才能培养学生写出内容充实，用词贴切，行文流畅，既有丰富的达意功能和交流功能，又有一定的修辞手法的佳作呢？现将本人在教学中的几点尝试小结如下：
（一）在积累中领悟。古语说得好：“巧妇难为无米之炊”。因此，在进行书面表达训练之前，我特别强调学生注重语言知识的输入和积累。应该说，听、说、读、写四种技能是相辅相成，相得益彰的。听和读是理解和吸收语言知识的基本手段，只有做足做好这一方面的积累，才能保证好的输出能力。我主要从以下几个点入手：
（1）朗读训练。要求和督促学生以课文段落、所做过的阅读和完形中的优美篇章、新英语九百句、21世纪报中贴近学生学习和生活、社会发展、时代气息的时文为内容，每天保证15分钟的大声朗读，在朗读中领悟和理解语言的结构和功能，培养语感，加深对措辞和表达的感悟。
（2）听写训练。在日常的教学中，有意识地搜集优美实用的词、句、段落和语篇，利用课前3—5分钟进行听写，不仅能促进学生更准确地理解句子及篇章，熟练地书写句子，有效地锻炼学生的`书面表达能力，也为日后的写作积累了材料。
（3）摘录好词、好句和好的段落。在平时学习中多留意，多收集素材，力求每天至少记住1—2个好的词句，并尽可能地运用到写作中，这样写作时就可以做到胸有成竹，而不会手忙脚乱，无从下手。
（4）错题集锦。建议学生自备一本命名为 “HotPotatoes”（烫手的马铃薯）的小册子，用以整理和订正练习和考试中出现的错误，随身携带，并时不时地拿出来翻看和辩析，确保在今后少犯或不犯类似的错误。
（二）在训练中突破。提高学生的写作能力并非一朝一夕之功。在教学过程中，教师应自始至终抓好英语基础知识，结合学生的实际情况，突出学生主体，采取有序多样的训练方式来提高学生的遣词造句、谋篇布局的能力，提高实践能力和书面表达能力。
（1）严把书写关。整洁漂亮的书写会给人以美好的印象，也会在一定程度上提高了作文的档次。因此，即使在平时的作业中，我要求组长、科代表层层把关，对随意塗改、书写潦草的作业一律退回重做，力求人人做到卷面整洁，书写工整规范，并把这一观念渗透到平时的每一环节。
（2）常抓改写和缩写。高中英语新教材内容丰富，题材广泛，包容风土人情、历史地理、名人传记、新闻出版、环境保护、自然灾害等方方面面，高中英语写作《高中英语作文教学尝试》。在加强语篇教学的同时，应适时地让学生围绕课文内容进行写的练习，提供机会让他们运用相关的语言知识，是提高写作能力的重要环节；也可精选一些课外英文读物（如《二十一世纪报》）的部分篇章，要求学生进行缩写和改写，让他们在丰富的内容中学会把握要点，又有充分的选择和个性发挥余地。
（3）全真试题演练。认真搜集历年的高考卷、往届的期中和期末考的书面表达并整理归类，有意识地将原文的相关的词、短语和结构挖空，要求学生借助所给的提示完成文中的空白处，让他们在所创设的不同的语境中对错误率较高的动词时态和语态、关键词组和短语、恰当的连词和引导词、实用的句式结构等方面加以强化训练，提高他们在今后的写作中关注和把握好这几方面的意识。
（4）重新排序法。把文章的顺序打乱，然后要求学生按所提供的信息重新排序，使学生在训练中对上下文的衔接及篇章的构建有更加深入和到位的体会及升华；也使他们感受到为了使短文通顺、流畅、自然，不仅得重视篇章的行文逻辑，谋篇布局和连贯性，还必须采用恰当的词汇短语使句与句、段与段之间衔接紧密，过渡自然，使文章紧凑整和，言简意赅。
（5）限时现场作文训练。经过一段时间的积累和循序渐进的实践，定期地让学生进行现场作文的训练是很有必要的。训练中，我主要对文章的体裁作出统一的规定，并让学生自己提供10个左右的词组和短语，2—3个的句式结构，最后汇总在黑板上；然后让他们就这些词组、短语和结构进行口头造句训练，在确保大多数学生已掌握了这些词、句的用法的基础上，要学生门在规定的时间内完成书面表达。在训练的过程中，学生可利用所学的某些词汇、句型，借助已形成的思维定势，用英语表达思想，传递信息，不仅使学生觉得学到的英语知识有了用武之地，也极大地减轻了写作的心理压力，增强了写好文章的信心。
（三）在评改中提高。新课标明确指出在教学中应“以学生为中心，以活动为中心，以任务为中心，突出学生主体，倡导体验与参与，在体验、参与和合作中互相促进，共同进步”，因此在作文的评改我凸现学生的主体性，充分发动学生参与和体验，在做中学、体验中提高。
（1）吃透评分标准。学生只有在了解写作的评分标准之后，才有可能做到有所侧重，有的放矢，也才不会因某一方面的偏差而白白丢分。因此，在系统训练之前，我都认真地组织学生对评分标准进行学习和研究，确保学生领会评分标准的依据和要旨，以便在写作中避开不利因素，最大限度地减少无谓的失分。
（2）组织自评和组评。在以往的教学中，书面表达都是老师辛辛苦苦评改，而学生只关心得了几分，然后就置之不理了，因此效果总是不尽人意。现在我采用让学生自评和分组评改。比如在配套练习或测试中的书面表达，主要地是把范文印发给学生，人手一份，先明确要点；再点出关键词组短语；然后是文章的连贯性和结构的合理化，也就分数的比例进行一定的指导，最后让学生根据以上几个方面进行自评。在现场限时训练之后，以4人一组把学生分成几个小组，每个成员负责一部份，就动词的正确形式、短语词组的合理搭配、句式结构的准确性及关联词的恰当应用进行评判，分工明确，各司其职；最后再汇总，共同对这几篇短文打分，使学生在分工协作与亲身体验中有更深的印象，在评价别人的同时也达到自省和探究的效果，可谓一举多得。
（3）凸现优美的词句。应该说，在学生的作文中，我们能时不时发现一些优美的词句。因此在评改时，我都尽可能地把这些词句勾画出来，并不失时机地向学生推荐并用多媒体课件集中展示，使学生从中得到肯定、鼓励和推动，也激发他们去作出更多的尝试和创造。
（4）开辟习作欣赏角。经过一段时间的实践和练兵，适时地从学生的习作中选录一些篇章，刊登在习作欣赏角。作品的选录可从多个角度入手，既可以是书写漂亮的佳作以原卷张贴，也可以是进步明显的习作滕写之后张贴，还可以是学生推荐的名篇佳作，诗词歌曲，使学生在欣赏中学习，在学习中竞争，在竞争中提高。
（5）细化作文分数。作文的得分是对学生的劳动的肯定和评估，学生们对此也极为关注。如何充分利用这一有利因素来促动学生致力于书面表达的提高呢？经过一段时间的摸索，我做了细化作文分数的尝试。打分的时候，我把分数分解成内容分（15）+学以致用或优美词句分（３－５）+书写分（２—４），特别突出学以致用分和书写分，在平时的点点滴滴有意识地进行渗透和倡导，使他们在训练中有明确的导向和目标，达到事半功倍之效。
总而言之，提高书面表达的能力不可能是一蹴而就的。只有在明析了评分标准的前提下，经过不懈的积累，掌握一定的写作技巧，通过行之有效的写作实践及不断的归纳和总结来提高学生的谴词造句和谋篇布局的能力，才有可能使他们的写作能力得到质的飞跃。
英语作文 20
Strengths and Weaknesses
It is important to know our good and bad points because this knowledge will help us to improve.We should examine ourselves and learn who we are.Above all,we should recognize our strengths and weaknesses.For example,I am healthy and fit,so I can work hard.Im also optimistic,humble and polite.These are my strengths.However,I also have weakneaaes.For one thing,Im stubborn and a little impatient.Im sometimes lazy as well and can spent a whole day just watching TV and eating junk food.Im not ashamed to admit these bad pints.Knowing what they are lets me focus on improving myself.
英文作文 21
Hello everyone,
My name is XXX from Shaanxi Normal University, I am horror to be here today and I am very happy to receive this award-----“The Super Cup” Chinese brush handwriting competition of for college students nationwide.
When I standing on the “The Super Cup” stage for special award, many thoughts passing through my mind. The progress of practicing writing for 4 years can’t help coming to me. During the 4 years, because of teacher Liu’s inculcation with profundity and an easy-to-understand approach, I got many chances to exercise. During the 4 years, because of parents’ supports ignoring any difficulty, I got much encourage in study. During the 4 years, because of my regular effort, I got the achievement. So I must thank teacher Liu, thank my parents, thank all people who cared and helped me.
Listening kinds of praises from audiences, I promise you, I will work hard and fight for taking more progress.
大家好:
我叫XXX,来自陕西师范大学，我今天能站在这里感到很自豪，我很高兴获得了这个奖----“超级杯”全国大学生书法大赛。
当我站在“超级杯”特等奖的台上时，很多思绪涌入我的脑海。4年来的书法练习过程不禁浮现眼前。4年� 4年� 4年� 所以我必须感谢刘老师，感谢我的父母，感谢关心和帮助过我的人。
听着观众的各种赞美，我承诺你们，我会为取得更大的进步而努力奋斗。
英文作文 22
Finally look forward to the summer vacation,today brother took me to the roller skating.
After a while,we came to the phoenix mountain park.At this time of the park,people mountain people colours.Brother on the skateboard sliding forward to rapidly.I also cant wait to put on roller skates,holding a tree stumbling stood up,can not stand,had a fall.I stood up again,carefully moving forward,afraid of accidentally will fall.Despite this carefully,feet or not to work,with shaking legs.Im standing instability and fell to the ground.Thought: how I this seemingly simple skating so difficult
Sitting on a bench in the park,I depressed sum up the experience of several falls.If he is,as far as possible let the body bow forward,feet apart with eight,hand to swing naturally,as far as possible make the roller skates and ground contact,center of gravity concentration on my feet.。.Thought of here I stand up again,according to summarize the experience of began to cross it.Curiously,the speed was much faster than the original.When I can draw up well when I take fast,glad heart than eating the honey still sweet.When I get carried away pounce,but fell down his face,its sorrow! After a few wrestling,I finally mastered the essentials of roller skating.
Now my roller skating technology,has reached the sliding fast nor the degree of wrestling.I not only learned how to roller skating,to better understand the "everything comes to him who waits" the words of truth.
终于盼到了暑假，今天哥哥带我去滑旱冰。
一会儿，我们来到了凤凰山公园。这时的公园，人山人海。五光十色的霓虹灯交相辉映。大哥哥登上滑板急速的向前滑去。我也迫不及待的穿上旱冰鞋，扶着一棵树跌跌撞撞的'站了起来，可还没站稳，就摔了个四脚朝天。我重新站起来，小心翼翼的向前挪动，生怕一不小心会摔倒。尽管这样小心，脚还是不听使唤，腿跟着摇晃。我站不稳又摔倒在地。心想:看似简单的滑冰怎么我这就这么难呢？
我垂头丧气的坐在公园的长椅上，自己总结这几次摔倒的经历。如果快要摔倒的时候，尽量让身体向前弓着，双脚叉开呈倒八字，手要自然摆动，尽量让旱冰鞋和地面接触，重心集中在脚上……想到这里我又站起来，按照自己总结的经验开始划了起来。说来也怪，速度竟比原来快了许多。当我能顺利的划起来时我划得飞快，心中高兴的比吃了蜜还甜。正当我得意忘形一跃而起时，却摔了嘴啃泥，真是乐极生悲呀！经过几次摔跤，我终于掌握了滑旱冰的要领。
现在我的滑旱冰技术，已经达到了滑得飞快也不摔跤的程度了。我不光学会了滑旱冰，更领悟了“功夫不负有心人“这句话的道理。
英文作文 23
What do You Want to Be When You Grow Up?This question and another similar question, Have you decide
This question and another similar question, Have you decided what you will do after you finish school? were among the most common questions people often asked me when I was a small child and then a student in school. Choosing the right career is very important. For this reason we should try to find out what our talents and interests are and how we can use them. There are many careers open to each of us. Many persons find their place in government service, and many others may be interested in going into the business world. Teaching, newspaper works, medicine, engineering, science -- these and many other fields offer fascinating careers to persons with talent and training.
长大后你想干什么？
这个问题和另一个相似的问题 你决定完成学业之后做什幺了吗？ 是我小时候和在学校时人们问得最多的一个问题。选择一个适当的职业是非常重要的。因此，我们必需找出自己的天赋和兴趣所在并且要知道如何加以利用。我们每个人都面临着许多职业选择。一些人在政府机构找到了他们的位置，而另一些人则可能喜欢在商界驰骋。教育、新闻、医药、工程、科学等和其它许多行业给都有才能的人提供了丰富的就业机会。
英文作文 24
Tough challenges reveal our strengths and weaknesses. This statement is certainly true; adversity helps us discover who we are. Hardships can often lead us to examine who we are and to question what is important in life, In fact, people who have experienced seriously adverse events frequently report that they were positively changed by their negative experiences.
Assignment: Do you think that ease does not challenge us and that we need adversity to help us discover who we are?
Everyone goes through their lives seeing and experiencing different things. At times, these different situations may cause one to act differently than another would in the same situation. It can be readily stated that Ease does not challenge us; adversity helps us discover who we are. Through literature, one can see how this statement proves to be true.
In the play, The Enemy of the People, by Henrik Ibsen, the protagonist, Dr. Stockholm, faced adversity, and through that, was able to discover his true beliefs and who he was. Before Dr. Stockholm was put in a situation where he had to face adversity, he had lived his life with mild ease and regularity. He acted just like everyone else in the town he lived in. Years later, he discovered that the popular bath houses was infected with bacteria. Determined to spread his findings, Dr. Stockholm went to the newspaper and the local governing office to try and make his discovery known. However, both the paper and the government werent as inspired to really let the public know about this serious problem due to the popularity of the bath houses. As a result, Dr. Stockholm was forced to face adversity and find a way to achieve his previously set goal. Through adversity, Stockholm was able to truely see how his personality was . He was able to understand his severe discontent with the government and society as a whole. In essence, Stockholm was able to discover his actual self . This, however, only happened when he was faced with a challenge.
英文作文 25
Today is a good day for me! I'm very lucky to be a volunteer for Beijing Olympic. I worked hard to help the foreign children from all over the world.
I showed them the road to their hotel. I helped them to find what they are looking for. I helped them to know something about China and Chinese people.
The foreign children thanked me. They said my English was very good. I was very happy and smiled nice. I hope I can do more for Beijing Olympic. And I hope Beijing Olympic will be a great success.